1) Elevator Pitch 2:
https://youtu.be/ZpDbSxiAejc
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch:
Most of the feedback that I received on my previous elevator pitch post was positive and praised the potential of the business idea proposed through the elevator pitch. Some of my friends suggested to make some different versions of the pitch outside my comfort zone and to try and test those out to see if they work. I tried doing a bit of that in this pitch.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I changed up the introductory part a bit to make it more catchy in order to be able to try and attract more customers. I focused on just one segment of the market rather than the entire market. I still think that this is not the best I can do and hope to improve a lot with practice and do even better for the third elevator pitch.
Hi Tarang,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your second elevator pitch. I like how you took your friends advice and went out of your comfort zone to present a much more catchy and attention-grabbing pitch. It is important to make sure that within those 90 seconds that you are presenting, that you do not lose your listeners so it was great that you focused on one segment rather than the whole market. Great job!