Friday, April 3, 2020
Elevator Pitch No. 3
The Pitch:
https://youtu.be/EBM_N8SNSUM
A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch:
Though most of the feedback that I received from my previous elevator pitch was positive, I asked some of my other friends and also some people that I met for the social capital assignment to help me out in being able to improve my pitch. One of the feedbacks I received was that I didn’t concentrate on my other feature for car rental service as much as the first one. The others were basically based on what were the parts that liked out of both the previous pitches.
What did you change based on the feedback:
Based on the feedback, I talked a bit more about my second feature as well to keep a balance between both the feature of my business idea. Then, I listened to everyone’s feedback and combined the best parts of the previous two pitches together to form a better overall pitch.
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Hey Tarang,
ReplyDeleteI watched this pitch and your last one and you are definitely making strides! For next time, I would incorporate hand gestures to make the pitch more engaging. It also conveys enthusiasm for your product which is important for keeping the customer's attention for the entirety of the pitch. Overall good work, but hand gestures would change your pitch from good to great!
Hi Tarang,
ReplyDeleteI was able to clearly see the changes you made based on the feedback that you had received, great job! I know that it can be hard to take into consideration every single feedback that was given to you but you were able to do that pretty well. One feedback that I will give for this elevator pitch is to keep in mind your delivery, it is important that you are explicitly showing how passionate you are about your business through your body language and intonations. Overall, great post!